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Dan's Pony Surprise. Chapter 2

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"So where are you from?" Mathsmatics asked curiously.
"Earth." Rap said.
"Well this is Earth silly." Mathematics giggled.
"But...but how? I could swear theres no talking ponies back home." Rap said confused.
"Well, this is Eqestria, but maybe its just another world, thats called Earth but isn't the same Earth you know, but is instead a different Earth with didn't creatures walking on the ground and flying in the air instead of what creatures walk and fly on your Earth." The pink mare smiled. Bouncing up and down on the spot.
"That made no sense what so ever Pinkie." Mathmatics smiled.
"I know." Pinkie smiled.
" Look, I just want to go home...I miss having fingers...." Rap sighed.
"Fingers? Oh like what Spike has. So your a dragon?" Pinkie asked.
"What...no. I'm a human..Or at least I was.."
"A human, but I'm pretty sure they died out years ago." MathsMatics said.
"Well this world is obviously more different from my world than I thought." Rap said.
"Well, what was the last thing you remember when you was a human?" MathsMatics asked.
"Falling into a portal type thing..." Rap replayed, forgetting the name. "Or at least thats what I think happened."
"How?" MathMatics asked.
"I fell off my chair. Not sure how. But I did. Then everything went dark and when I woke up I was here."
"Oh..." MathsMatics.
"Do you know anyone who could help me get home." The stallion asked.
"Oo oo Yes!" Pinkie smiled as she jumped in front of Rap.
"Who?" Rap asked.
"Twilight!" Pinkie bounced. "She'll know! Isn't that right Fluttershy," She smiled as she turned to face the yellow Pegasus.
"Oh..um..yes." Fluttershy said softly.
"Ok, can you take me to her?" The turquoise colt smiled.
"Of course, follow me!" Pinkie smiled as she started bouncing ahead. Rap, MathsMatics and Fluttershy followed behind.

Rap was worried at first, but when he saw the lavender unicorn mare, he wasn't so worried.
"Hi! I need to know how to get back to my world, can you help?" Rap said, "I live on Ea- Not this planet..."
"Ok! How did you get here?" asked Twilight Sparkle.
"Not again" thought Rap, quite annoyed.
In one big breath (and very fast) he said "I fell off my chair, I fell into a portal type thing, then everything went black and when I woke up everyone was a pony, then I came here with a pony and I want to go home!" He took a big gasp of air once he stopped
"Um, could you repeat that a little slower please?" Twilight smiled. Rap repeated what he had said, and Twilight understood what he meant...sort of. "I suppose that makes sense, but I'm still not sure I follow you." She smiled. Rap just sighed in disbelief.
"He says that where he's from he's a human." MathsMatics smiled.
Still a bit out of breath Rap said "Yeah..."
"I think I could faint right know..." he thought.
It's short (again) I know...

:iconspitfire-sos: helped me with my spelling and grammer.

This is a fanfic about Dan, a human, going to ponyville, and being turned into a pony. Not knowing how things work, and just wanting to return home, how will he cope in this new and unusal world?

This is my first fanfic Ever and I'm hoping that you like it.
It should only be around 4 or 5 chapters but it depends ;P

Hope you like and please fav and comment :D

Mathmatics and Rap/Dan belong to me.
Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie belong to Hasbro
My little pony belongs to Hasbro and Lauren Faust.
© 2012 - 2024 tails-fangirl
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EquestriaPlush's avatar
Great second chapter. And thanks for the Fave on my FlutterShy :)